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addiction in the third person. by ~IrishHippiePoet:iconIrishHippiePoet:



For years, she claimed that
a monster had woven its way through each vein-

-and the only way to calm it was to
give it a taste of its own power, but
what has always startled me is
how terrified she is of the
night-strangers coming to collide;
exploding in X and sin and sex.

She prefers the intimate slide of the
needle that makes love to her, and
leaves her in a heap on the floor
(she hasn't moved on
from the men who did the same).

She says
it calms the monster for awhile,
but I think it just creates new ones.
:iconirishhippiepoet:

Author's Comments

This is the same as detonate .
It comes from a different place. Most of what I used to write came from observations and feelings about them. I've rarely written anything that is actually hand-picked from my life.

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:iconamarand:
Pure, raw emotion and feeling...expressed!
:iconiamphoenixmoth:
oh fuck i love this i love this i love it.

--
Me: I would be terrified if someone asked me to make a family tree.
Me: and all the cousins I mean? that's JUST my mother's side.
<annika235>that wouldnt be a tree
<annika235>it's a FOREST
:iconirishhippiepoet:
Thanks! I missed this.
:iconiamphoenixmoth:
I MISSED YOU

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Me: I would be terrified if someone asked me to make a family tree.
Me: and all the cousins I mean? that's JUST my mother's side.
<annika235>that wouldnt be a tree
<annika235>it's a FOREST
:iconcibbwin:
I didn't like this the first time I read it, but re-reading it, I appreciate the tale of self-abuse. Good job.

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It takes courage to enjoy it!
:iconcibbwin:
Welcome! You should read my last prose, if you haven't. :)

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It takes courage to enjoy it!
:iconcleader09:
"She says
it calms the monster for awhile,
but I think it just creates new ones. "

The story of most drug addicts life!

Beautiful poem and very emotional.:)

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